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Behind the Boards: A Blog by Artist, Paul Temple

Welcome to the blog! Here you'll find insights into the art of storyboarding, concept development, shooting boards, and visual storytelling for film, television, and advertising. From camera planning techniques to the emotional impact of character design, this is where I’ll share my expertise honed over a decade of working with directors and top brands. Whether you're a creative director, filmmaker, or agency looking to elevate your pitch, this blog reveals how powerful visuals drive unforgettable stories.

Questions? Email me at paul@paultemplestudios.com

Storyboard frame from an Infiniti Cars ad pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Storyboard frame from an Infiniti Cars ad pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Storyboards and Cinematography: Speaking the Same Language

Paul Temple September 25, 2025

Why Storyboards Matter

Some people think storyboards are just for brainstorming, cute sketches to throw ideas on a page, but they’re actually the blueprint for every shot in your production. For directors and DPs, my boards are a visual shorthand. They show lens choices, blocking, lighting cues, and camera movement without repeating a hundred times why a shot works.

Lens Choices and Their Impact

Lens selection is where storyboards start flexing real power. Each lens changes a scene’s perception. Wide angles exaggerate space, telephotos compress it, shallow depth of field isolates a moment. I don’t dictate the gear, but I map the effect. When a DP sees my board, they immediately know what the story requires, not just what the shot looks like. This saves time, money, and headaches on set.

Blocking and Performance

Actors don’t just stand in the right place. They move, react, hesitate. A glance, a pause, a step forward communicates story. My boards mark those beats. I illustrate gestures, stances, and eye lines so the camera can follow effortlessly. Nothing kills a scene like improvising movements that contradict the visual logic.

Lighting Setup Without Confusion

Lighting setups are embedded in the storyboard language too. I’m not giving technical schematics, but I indicate where shadows, highlights, and contrast should fall to support the mood. A DP sees the board and understands the emotional weight without guessing. It’s not about micromanaging. It’s about giving them the tools to make creative choices faster.

Mapping Camera Movement

Camera movement is where storyboards earn their keep. Pans, dollies, push-ins, handheld sequences, every motion affects rhythm and tension. I map trajectories and timing to guide the viewer’s attention. One misplaced move can flatten a scene or ruin a beat. Storyboards give the DP confidence that the movement supports the story.

Continuity Across Shoots

Multi-day shoots or reshoots demand consistent angles, lens choices, and lighting. My boards act as a visual reference. A week later, the crew doesn’t have to guess what the original intent was. They see it and can replicate it precisely. This saves reshoots, rewrites, and arguments on set.

Streamlining Collaboration

Directors, DPs, gaffers, and production designers all reference the same visual language. Instead of debating whether shadows feel right or if the lens is good enough, everyone looks at the board. Miscommunication drops. Focus shifts to performance and nuance instead of translating intentions.

Anticipating Problems Before They Happen

Tight locations, mixed lighting, or unpredictable actors always cause headaches. With clear boards, the crew anticipates challenges, plans solutions, and keeps the shoot on schedule. Storyboards aren’t just visual tools. They are preventative medicine for filmmaking chaos.

Experimentation Without Disruption

Boards double as negotiation and experimentation tools. Directors and DPs can explore options for framing, blocking, and movement without holding up the shoot. If a camera movement or lens choice isn’t working, we tweak the boards, not the whole production. It is cheaper, faster, and less stressful than adjusting mid-shoot.

Storyboards Speak Cinematography

In essence, my storyboards speak the language of cinematography. They provide clarity without taking creative control. They give directors and DPs the confidence to execute, reduce miscommunication, and protect the integrity of the story. Every sketch, note, and frame communicates a decision, a feeling, or an emotional beat.

When a crew knows exactly what each frame needs to convey, the production becomes a collaborative machine instead of a guessing game. Storyboards aren’t optional. They are the playbook that keeps the storytelling on track, the budget under control, and the shoot sane.

If you want to see how storyboards can align your cinematic vision and get every shot right, shoot me an email!

📩 Reach out: paul@paultemplestudios.com
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Concept art for unnamed indie film project. Art by Paul Temple.

Concept art for unnamed indie film project. Art by Paul Temple.

Concept Art and Storyboards for Indie Film Crowdfunding

Paul Temple September 18, 2025

Independent filmmaking has always required equal parts creativity and resourcefulness. Unlike major studios with vast budgets, indie filmmakers often work with lean teams and even leaner bank accounts. Crowdfunding platforms such as Kickstarter, Indiegogo, and Seed&Spark have become a lifeline for bringing bold new stories to the screen.

But crowdfunding is about more than just asking for money. It is about inspiring trust, sparking imagination, and showing potential backers that your vision is worth supporting. This is where concept art and storyboards become powerful tools. A pitch deck filled with words alone can fall flat. A video without visuals often leaves too much to the imagination. Strong illustrations help fill the gap, making your film’s world tangible before the cameras ever roll.

As an illustrator and storyboard artist, I have worked with indie directors who are preparing crowdfunding campaigns, as well as those moving toward production after a successful raise. I have seen firsthand how professional visuals can turn an idea into something people want to invest in.

Why Visuals Matter in Crowdfunding

The crowdfunding space is competitive. Hundreds of new projects launch every month, all competing for the attention and wallets of potential backers. To stand out, filmmakers need to communicate their story quickly and memorably.

That is nearly impossible to do with text alone. Even a well-crafted pitch video can feel vague if it only features a director talking to the camera. Backers want to know what kind of film they are supporting. They want a sense of the tone, scale, and emotional weight of the project.

Concept art and storyboards provide that clarity. They show backers:

  • What the characters will look like

  • How the story will unfold visually

  • The mood and atmosphere of the world

  • That the director has a clear vision

In short, visuals move the project from “idea” to “film in the making.”

Concept Art: Setting the Tone

Concept art is often the first layer of visual communication in a crowdfunding campaign. These illustrations establish the mood and design of the film’s world.

For example, if your story takes place in a futuristic city, concept art can help show the skyline, costume design, and overall tone. If it is a historical drama, concept art might capture the lighting, color palette, and period-specific details that ground the story in its era.

Backers respond emotionally to concept art. A single striking illustration can say more about your project than a two-minute video ever could. It conveys not just what your film is, but why it matters.

I am currently working with a filmmaker who graduated from LMU (Loyola Marymount University) on character designs and key illustrations. These visuals will serve as the centerpiece of his crowdfunding campaign, giving potential backers a vivid first look at his characters and the story’s emotional arc. Instead of guessing what his film might feel like, backers will immediately see it.

Storyboards: Showing the Story

While concept art sets the tone, storyboards show the story itself. They break down the film into sequences and demonstrate how the camera will move through the action.

For crowdfunding, storyboards can be incredibly powerful in two ways:

  1. Pitch Videos – Many campaigns include a short teaser or proof-of-concept trailer. Storyboards help directors plan these efficiently, maximizing production value even on a small budget.

  2. Campaign Materials – Sharing storyboard frames on your campaign page gives backers insight into how the film will flow. It reassures them that you have thought through not just the idea, but the execution.

Recently, I worked with an indie director on storyboards for his short film. He plans to release some of those frames as part of his crowdfunding push, but also use the boards on set during filming. That’s a win-win!

Why Professional Illustrations Matter

Some filmmakers might ask, “Why not just use AI or quick sketches?” While technology can generate images, it cannot capture intention.

A professional illustrator tailors visuals to the story, the tone, and the audience. For indie crowdfunding, this is critical. Backers are not just buying into a story; they are buying into a filmmaker’s vision. The illustrations need to reflect care, purpose, and clarity.

A machine can produce an image, but it cannot collaborate with a director on how best to present a scene. It cannot understand the thematic weight of a moment or adjust visuals to highlight a character’s inner conflict. Professional illustrators bring discernment that builds trust—something algorithms cannot offer.

For filmmakers asking people to invest in their story, that trust can make the difference between a campaign that reaches its goal and one that falls short.

Building a Crowdfunding Campaign with Visuals

So how can indie filmmakers integrate concept art and storyboards into their crowdfunding campaigns? Here are some key strategies:

1. Create a Visual Pitch Deck

A pitch deck with illustrations makes your campaign instantly more professional. Include concept art of key characters, environments, or pivotal moments in the story. Backers should be able to flip through and immediately understand the scope of your project.

2. Use Storyboards to Plan a Teaser

A short teaser trailer can boost your campaign’s credibility. Even if you cannot shoot final footage yet, storyboard sequences can guide a proof-of-concept video that excites backers.

3. Share Artwork on Social Media

Crowdfunding campaigns rely heavily on social promotion. Having a bank of professional illustrations allows you to drip-feed visuals leading up to launch. Each post becomes a chance to capture interest.

4. Show the Process

Backers love to feel part of the creative journey. Sharing early sketches, character design drafts, or snippets of storyboard panels helps them feel invested in the project’s progress.

5. Keep the Story First

While visuals are powerful, they should always serve the story. Avoid overwhelming your campaign with polished frames that distract from the narrative. The goal is to communicate vision, not create a finished film before you have even raised the budget.

The Backer’s Perspective

It is worth remembering what backers want when they browse a campaign. Most are not film professionals. They might not understand technical jargon or detailed production schedules. What they do respond to are clear visuals that connect emotionally.

An illustration of a heroic moment, a storyboard of a suspenseful sequence, or a character design that feels authentic—all of these help potential backers see what they are funding. That emotional connection is what inspires people to click “Back this Project.”

Indie Films That Prove the Power of Visuals

Many successful indie campaigns have used visuals as a cornerstone of their fundraising. While I cannot share private case studies, I have observed projects where professional concept art and storyboards made the difference between obscurity and recognition.

One example is The Chosen, the crowdfunded series created by Dallas Jenkins. While not every filmmaker has access to the same resources, The Chosen proved how important it is to give potential backers a clear visual window into the story. From promotional art to behind-the-scenes illustrations, visuals helped the project connect deeply with its audience.

Other smaller projects have similarly relied on concept art to demonstrate vision long before a single frame of footage was shot. These campaigns remind us that in crowdfunding, imagination and clarity often matter more than production value.

Practical Tips for Filmmakers

If you are preparing to launch a crowdfunding campaign, here are some practical steps you can take with visuals:

  • Budget for Illustration – Set aside part of your pre-launch budget to commission concept art or storyboards. Think of it as an investment in the campaign’s success.

  • Focus on Key Moments – You do not need dozens of illustrations. A handful of strong pieces that capture your film’s tone and story beats can go a long way.

  • Collaborate Closely – Work with your illustrator as part of the creative team. Share your script, mood boards, and inspirations. The stronger the collaboration, the stronger the visuals.

  • Use Illustrations Beyond Crowdfunding – The artwork you commission can also be used later in press kits, festival submissions, and even production design discussions. Think of it as a long-term asset.

Why Storyboards and Concept Art Are Worth It

At the heart of indie filmmaking is a leap of faith. You are asking people to believe in your story before it exists on screen. That requires courage, clarity, and vision.

Concept art and storyboards are not just marketing tools—they are bridges of trust. They reassure backers that the filmmaker has a plan. They help collaborators understand what the final film should look like. And most importantly, they ignite imagination.

For filmmakers navigating the world of crowdfunding, visuals are not optional. They are essential. Whether you are raising $5,000 for a short or $500,000 for a feature, illustrations give your campaign the spark it needs to stand out.

Final Thoughts

Independent filmmakers are storytellers at heart. Crowdfunding is simply another stage of storytelling—inviting others to believe in your vision and take part in making it real.

Concept art and storyboards give that invitation form. They turn ideas into images. They help strangers on the internet feel like partners in your creative journey.

So before you launch your next campaign, ask yourself: how clearly can people see your film? If the answer is not clear enough, concept art and storyboards may be the missing piece that moves your project from dream to funded reality.

📩 Reach out: paul@paultemplestudios.com
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Concept art from Firelight Creative’s “Eden’s Twilight” film pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Concept art from Firelight Creative’s “Eden’s Twilight” film pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Drawing Faith to the Screen: Storyboards and Concept Art for Christian Filmmaking

Paul Temple September 15, 2025

Christian filmmaking has grown into one of the most influential movements in modern media. Studios like AFFIRM Films, Angel Studios, and Kingdom Story Company are not only creating box office hits, they are proving that faith-based stories resonate with global audiences. The rise of films like I Can Only Imagine, War Room, and series like The Chosen has shown that stories rooted in scripture and faith are not just niche. They are powerful, relevant, and commercially successful.

What ties all these productions together is the same thing that ties together every great film: clarity of vision. And that is where storyboards and concept art come in.

As a storyboard artist and illustrator, I work with directors and producers to translate words on the page into images that can guide everything from fundraising to final production. In Christian filmmaking, where the stories are sacred and the budgets are often tighter, the need for precise, faith-driven visual storytelling is even greater.

Why Christian Films Need Storyboards and Concept Art

In secular filmmaking, producers often have the luxury of assuming their audience will engage because of spectacle, celebrity, or genre appeal. Faith-based films are different. They must connect emotionally and spiritually while staying true to scripture and accessible to broad audiences.

Storyboards and concept art help bridge that gap. For fundraising, they show potential investors exactly what a scene will look like on screen. A passage from Genesis about Noah building the ark becomes more than words. With concept art, it becomes a fully realized image of wood, rainclouds, and laboring hands, ready to stir belief and financial backing.

During production, boards guide directors and cinematographers through the complex language of film. Whether it is a resurrection scene requiring reverence and restraint, or a comedic beat in a modern Christian family film, the timing, framing, and pacing can all be solved before the camera ever rolls.

Fundraising with Faith

Angel Studios has perfected the fan-funded model, proving that Christian audiences are willing to invest in content they believe in. But convincing backers is not just about passion, it is about presentation.

When a script is accompanied by concept art and storyboards, the pitch stops being abstract. It becomes tangible. Investors and supporters can see the Red Sea parting, or Christ calming the storm, before a single dollar is pledged. That vision builds trust. It reassures backers that the production team has both artistic clarity and technical competence to carry a project through.

I have worked on pitches where the boards themselves were enough to unlock funding. In one case, a series of frames depicting a biblical battle gave producers the confidence to approach distributors. The story was no longer confined to words. It was a moving, visual journey waiting to be filmed.

Keeping True to the Source

One of the greatest responsibilities of Christian filmmaking is handling scripture with accuracy and care. Studios like Pinnacle Peak Pictures and Provident Films understand this well, as do directors like the Erwin Brothers and Kendrick Brothers. When portraying biblical events, there is no room for careless staging.

Storyboards act as a safeguard. They force us to consider how each verse translates visually. Should the camera linger on the prodigal son’s embrace with his father, or on the crowd of onlookers? How do we present Christ’s miracles in a way that emphasizes faith rather than spectacle?

These decisions must be made with both artistry and reverence. Working through them in storyboards prevents costly mistakes later, ensuring that when the audience sees the film, they are moved spiritually as well as cinematically.

Modern Christian Stories on Screen

Not all Christian films are set in biblical times. Many, like I Can Only Imagine or Fireproof, deal with modern characters wrestling with faith in contemporary settings. Storyboards are just as crucial here.

Take a scene set in a church basement, where a family confronts their struggles. The performance may carry the emotion, but the boards dictate how the camera frames that intimacy. Does it hold wide to show isolation, or move in close to emphasize reconciliation? The visual language matters.

Faith-based producers like Kingdom Story Company and JCFilms Studios recognize that today’s audiences are visually literate. They expect the same level of sophistication in Christian films as they do in mainstream Hollywood. Storyboards help deliver that standard without compromising the message.

Learning from the Pioneers

Christian filmmakers stand on the shoulders of giants. Billy Graham understood the power of film decades ago, using media to spread the gospel worldwide. Dave Christiano built a foundation for faith-based storytelling with films like The Daylight Zone. Today, Dallas Jenkins has elevated the field with The Chosen, combining cinematic ambition with community-driven support.

What unites them is not just faith, but clarity of communication. Every great Christian film starts with someone who can take a story from scripture or personal testimony and make it cinematic. That is the exact purpose of storyboards and concept art.

Working with Directors and Writers

One of my favorite aspects of storyboard work is collaborating with directors and writers. In Christian filmmaking, this collaboration carries added weight. Writers want to honor the biblical text. Directors want to craft engaging cinema. Producers want to ensure the message reaches audiences.

My role is to align those goals visually. A script might say, “Jesus teaches the crowd,” but how large is the crowd? Where does the camera sit? Do we see the sea behind him, or do we focus on the expressions of the listeners?

These are not small details. They are choices that affect tone, meaning, and audience connection. By working through them in storyboard form, we give the entire team a visual grammar to speak from.

Faith on a Global Stage

Studios like AFFIRM Films and Angel Studios have already shown that Christian stories can compete with the biggest blockbusters. With platforms like streaming and international distribution, faith-based films are no longer confined to Sunday-school circles. They are shaping mainstream culture.

As Christian filmmaking continues to grow, the demand for professional pre-visualization will only increase. Funders, distributors, and audiences want to know that these stories are not only faithful, but also cinematic. Storyboards and concept art provide that proof.

Why the Human Touch Matters

Some people ask why a studio should invest in a human storyboard artist when software can generate images instantly. The answer lies in intention. A machine can produce an image, but it cannot wrestle with scripture. It cannot weigh the theological implications of how Christ is depicted on screen. It cannot collaborate with a director who is worried about whether the miracle looks reverent or theatrical.

The Lord uses real people to fulfill His will — real people who are filled with the Holy Spirit. Those people are guided in their decisions, and equipped with discernment to make choices that honor God’s story. Human illustrators bring that same discernment to Christian filmmaking. They do not just draw what looks good; they consider the narrative, the audience, and the leadings of the Holy Spirit. In faith-based projects, that discernment is everything.

Closing Thoughts

Christian filmmaking is not a passing trend. It is a movement that has proven its staying power, with studios like AFFIRM, Pinnacle Peak, and Angel Studios leading the charge, and producers like the Erwin Brothers and Kendrick Brothers creating films that resonate with millions.

As a storyboard artist, my goal is to help that movement continue by giving filmmakers the tools they need to tell stories with clarity and conviction. Whether it is raising funds with compelling concept art or guiding a director with shooting boards, the work is always about serving the story, the audience, and ultimately, the Lord.

Faith on screen deserves no less.

📩paul@paultemplestudios.com
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Storyboard frame for an Audible by Amazon ad pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Storyboard frame for an Audible by Amazon ad pitch. Art by Paul Temple.

Storyboard Revisions: Knowing When to Refine and When to Simplify

Paul Temple September 11, 2025

Revisions are inevitable. If you work in advertising or film, you already know this. A storyboard rarely sails through untouched, and honestly, that is part of the job. Clients, directors, and creative teams have ideas to test, details to tweak, and sometimes whole scenes to rethink. The real skill is not just in drawing the first draft but in knowing how to handle revisions. Do you push harder and add more detail, or do you strip back and keep it simple? That choice can make or break the usefulness of your boards.

I have spent years working with agencies, production houses, and directors who all bring different styles of feedback. Some want to see every frame polished like a finished illustration. Others want quick adjustments to staging or timing so they can test ideas without getting stuck in the weeds. Over time, I have learned that revisions are not just corrections. They are opportunities to decide how much the storyboard should carry and how much should be left open for the director and crew to interpret.

Why Revisions Happen

Before talking about how to handle them, it helps to acknowledge why revisions exist in the first place. Advertising campaigns change because clients are weighing brand identity, legal clearances, and sometimes personal taste. Film boards change because story beats shift, a line of dialogue gets cut, or the budget forces a different approach. None of this is unusual.

A storyboard is a conversation. It is a tool for testing how ideas will look and feel before money is spent on production. Revisions are a sign that people are engaging with your work. The challenge is figuring out how far to take each round of changes.

Knowing When to Push

Pushing a storyboard means leaning in with more detail, more nuance, and more cinematic intention. These are the moments when you add shading, refine expressions, lock down camera angles, and clarify staging so no one misreads the plan.

I push harder when:

  • The timing is critical. Comedy spots, action beats, or visual reveals often need exact framing. If a gag depends on a half-second pause or a glance timed just right, the boards must show it clearly.

  • Talent is involved. When the client is paying for a big-name actor, the boards need to capture likeness and gesture. The team wants to imagine how the star will look in the scene. Vague sketches will not cut it.

  • The production scale is large. If there are stunts, special effects, or expensive set pieces, clarity is everything. You cannot leave the director or cinematographer guessing. Pushing detail here prevents expensive mistakes later.

  • The director asks for it. Some directors are highly visual. They want boards that feel almost like a graphic novel so they can pitch confidently to the client or communicate with the crew.

When I push, I think of the board as a tool that has to do heavy lifting. It is not just about selling the idea but ensuring that timing, scale, and intent are crystal clear.

Knowing When to Simplify

On the other hand, sometimes the smartest move is to strip things back. A storyboard does not always need to be a finished illustration. In fact, too much detail can distract from the conversation. When the boards look too polished, clients might argue over the color of a jacket instead of the flow of the story.

I simplify when:

  • The concept is still evolving. If the creative team is still exploring big-picture ideas, fast sketches are better. They show intent without locking the director into specifics that may change tomorrow.

  • Speed is more important than polish. In pitches or early client meetings, the priority is getting ideas in front of people quickly. Spending hours rendering shadows and textures is wasted time if the whole idea is about to shift.

  • The revision is minor. If the only note is to change the angle of a hand or swap the background setting, there is no reason to redraw the entire frame with full detail. A simple fix communicates just as well.

  • The director prefers flexibility. Some directors like to keep things open so they can explore on set. For them, storyboards are guidelines, not mandates. Simpler boards encourage creativity rather than boxing them in.

Simplifying is not about doing less work. It is about respecting the process. Sometimes the most efficient path forward is a clean, readable sketch that gives space for ideas to keep breathing.

Reading the Room

The trickiest part of revisions is reading the room. Not every client wants the same level of detail, and not every director communicates in the same way. Some teams need every beat spelled out, while others just want reassurance that the story holds together.

Part of my job is figuring out who needs what. If I am working with a comedy director, I know timing is going to be everything, so I lean into precision. If I am working with an agency team still shaping their pitch, I focus on speed and clarity rather than polish. If the creative director wants boards that feel like finished artwork to impress a client, I adjust for that too.

Good storyboard work is not just about drawing. It is about listening and adapting. Revisions are signals, and if you read them well, you can figure out how far to push or how much to simplify.

The Danger of Overworking

One mistake I see often is overworking boards. It is tempting to polish every frame until it looks portfolio-ready, but that can be a trap. The more detail you pour into the drawings, the easier it becomes for clients to nitpick things that do not actually matter at that stage. Suddenly the conversation shifts from storytelling and shot flow to “why does the actor’s jacket look that color” or “can the background be more detailed.” Those are production questions, not storyboard questions.

I learned this the hard way. On one project, the boards were so polished they looked like finished illustrations. The client fell in love with them as if they were the final look of the film. Once production began, the reality of the budget, the lighting, and the set design could not possibly match the illustrated perfection. Instead of being excited by the shoot, the client felt let down because they had already “seen” a version of the film that was too ideal. The boards had set the wrong expectation.

That experience taught me something important: storyboards are not supposed to be the final product. Their job is to map the rhythm of the story, the flow of shots, the timing of the beats, and the placement of the camera. When boards get too detailed, they distract from that role. Clean, readable drawings are often more effective because they focus everyone’s attention on the sequence, not on the surface polish.

The truth is, a board only needs enough detail to communicate the action, mood, and framing. Anything more risks pulling energy away from what matters most.

The Value of Efficiency

Every revision is a negotiation between clarity and speed. The goal is not to make the prettiest drawing but to make the clearest communication tool. That means balancing effort with impact. If a change will make the story flow better, it is worth pushing. If a change is cosmetic, simplify.

Efficiency also builds trust. Directors and producers do not want to feel like revisions are going to slow down the process. If you can show that you can pivot quickly, keeping the boards useful without burning through time, you become an asset to the team.

Collaboration Through Revisions

The best revisions are not battles. They are collaborations. A director who sees you adjusting boards to support their vision will trust you more. An agency that knows you can deliver changes overnight will keep calling you back.

Revisions give you a chance to show that you are more than just an illustrator. You are part of the storytelling team. Sometimes that means pushing detail to help everyone see the scene more vividly. Other times it means simplifying so the idea stays flexible. Knowing the difference is what separates a technician from a collaborator.

Final Thoughts

Revisions are not the enemy. They are part of the process, and how you handle them can make a huge difference in how useful your boards are. The art is in knowing when to push and when to simplify. Push when the timing, talent, or scale demands it. Simplify when the idea is still forming or when polish will only slow things down.

After more than a decade of drawing for agencies, directors, and studios, I have learned that revisions are where the real value of a storyboard artist shows. Anyone can draw a first pass. It takes experience to know how to adjust, how to listen, and how to keep the boards serving the story.

At the end of the day, the measure of a storyboard is not how pretty it looks on a wall. It is how well it communicates the vision and keeps the production moving forward. That is why revisions matter. They are not setbacks. They are the fine-tuning that makes sure the train runs on time.

📩 Reach out: paul@paultemplestudios.com
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Black and white storyboard frame of Ben Stiller in Pepsi Zero Sugar’s Super Bowl ad. Art by Paul Temple.

Black and white storyboard frame of Ben Stiller in Pepsi Zero Sugar’s Super Bowl ad. Art by Paul Temple.

Landing the Laugh: Storyboarding Pepsi Zero Sugar’s Super Bowl Spots

Paul Temple September 8, 2025

Super Bowl commercials come with massive pressure. Millions of viewers, huge budgets, and A-list talent all waiting for the perfect joke to land. For the 2023 Pepsi Zero Sugar campaign, “Great Acting or Great Taste,” my job as the storyboard artist was to make sure every punchline, every comedic beat, and every subtle visual gag translated perfectly before cameras rolled.

The concept was simple in words but tricky in execution: challenge viewers to question whether they were enjoying the soda because it tasted great or because the actors were selling it so convincingly. The ads featured Ben Stiller and Steve Martin, two legends of comedy, and the campaign leaned into absurd humor that required precise timing and carefully planned visuals.

Working on this project, I was especially excited about the inclusion of Zoolander references. Anyone who knows me knows that movie is a personal favorite. Stiller’s over-the-top facial expressions and gestures, along with the nods to the fashion world, gave me plenty of material to craft storyboards that were both clear and playful.

Translating Humor to the Page

Comedy on-screen isn’t just about dialogue. It’s timing, body language, reaction shots, and subtle gestures. As a storyboard artist, my challenge is to take the written script and make sure the humor reads visually before the first take.

For example, in one spot, Ben Stiller’s hesitation before delivering a line needed to look awkward but intentional. The pause had to feel natural, yet exaggeration would make the gag hit harder. My storyboards broke down each frame, showing exact gestures, facial reactions, and camera framing.

Steve Martin’s comedic timing is famously understated, which presents a different kind of challenge. His reactions often carry the punchline. By mapping his expressions and movements in advance, the boards ensured nothing was lost in translation. This is especially important in Super Bowl spots where every second counts and audiences expect precision.

The Zoolander nods added another layer. One sequence had Stiller glancing at a model on set, mimicking his Zoolander signature moves. Planning these moments visually allowed the director to see the gag unfold frame by frame, making sure the joke wasn’t too subtle for the Super Bowl audience but still clever enough for fans of the movie.

Collaboration with Directors and Talent

One of the coolest parts of this project was seeing how storyboards became a communication tool with the talent. Ben Stiller personally reviewed the boards and provided notes on how he wanted certain gestures, pauses, or expressions adjusted. Getting that level of input directly from an actor of his caliber was amazing and gave me a chance to refine the visuals before production.

Steve Martin’s team also relied heavily on the boards. They helped confirm camera placements, timing of reactions, and how physical comedy would translate to the final cut. The boards weren’t just a blueprint; they were a conversation tool between director, actors, and crew. They allowed everyone to get on the same page before the first camera rolled.

By visualizing these comedic beats in advance, we could experiment with framing and staging options that would have been impossible to tweak on set without adding cost and time. The boards also helped directors see exactly where the humor would land, and where it needed to be exaggerated or toned down.

Scene-by-Scene Humor Breakdown

The first spot with Steve Martin set up the premise: are you enjoying Pepsi Zero Sugar because it tastes good, or because the acting is just that convincing? My storyboards captured Steve in each scenario: the DMV meltdown, disappointment over a tiny plate at a restaurant, his calm precision as a surgeon, and gloating over a board game victory against a child. Every gesture, glance, and expression was mapped so the audience could instantly read his acting while questioning if he was genuinely enjoying the soda. Comedic timing had to be perfect. By planning each frame, the director could focus on performance rather than figuring out the visual setup.

Ben Stiller’s spot featured battling a sci-fi creature, proposing in a restaurant, falling for a robot, and finally reprising his Zoolander character drinking Pepsi Zero Sugar. Each pose, expression, and micro-reaction was storyboarded to balance humor with narrative clarity. Stiller even gave personal notes on the boards, adjusting moments to hit just the right punch, making collaboration a highlight of the project.

Timing was critical in both spots. A millisecond off could ruin a joke, so each frame was plotted to ensure the punchlines landed exactly as intended. Storyboards gave the directors confidence, letting them focus on performance while I handled the precise visual storytelling.

Production Efficiency Without Losing Comedy

Super Bowl productions are high-pressure environments. Budgets are tight, and every second on set counts. By providing detailed storyboards, we reduced the need for reshoots and minimized downtime. The boards clearly communicated camera angles, actor movements, and comedic timing, which meant the crew could anticipate setups and lighting changes in advance.

For a campaign like this, efficiency doesn’t just save money. It preserves the humor. When actors know exactly how a scene will play visually, they can focus on performance rather than improvising or guessing what the director wants. The boards act as a guide for the entire team, keeping everyone aligned without slowing down the energy on set.

Storyboards also prevent miscommunication. A single gesture, glance, or expression can make or break a joke. By illustrating it in advance, we make sure that every visual element contributes to the humor without ambiguity. The director can see the gag, approve it, and move forward with confidence.

Why Hand-Drawn Storyboards Matter

While previsualization software and digital tools are popular, hand-drawn boards bring a level of nuance and clarity that is hard to replicate. A sketch can emphasize exaggeration or subtlety, show exact timing, and convey the intent behind a gesture or expression.

In this campaign, subtle nuances made a huge difference. Stiller’s smirk, a slight tilt of the head, or Martin’s understated reaction all had to be visible to the audience within a second or two. Hand-drawn boards allowed me to control every detail of how the joke would be seen.

Moreover, hand-drawn storyboards are inherently adaptable. As Ben Stiller suggested tweaks, I could adjust the illustrations on the spot, showing new ideas immediately. The human touch allowed us to iterate rapidly without losing the original comedic intention.

Extending the Campaign

After the initial spots aired during the Super Bowl, the campaign extended to include additional ads and tie-ins. Storyboards helped maintain consistency. They ensured that new sequences kept the same comedic timing, character gestures, and tone.

For example, a follow-up spot included more Zoolander references. Having detailed boards from the initial campaign meant we could plan new gags that fit seamlessly, preserving the humor while introducing fresh material. Directors and actors could quickly understand the intended joke without needing lengthy explanations.

Storyboards also assisted with editing. When multiple takes were available, editors could use the boards to choose the version that matched the visual intention. Every decision, from pacing to gesture emphasis, was guided by the storyboard.

Conclusion

The Pepsi Zero Sugar “Great Acting or Great Taste” campaign is a perfect example of how storyboards are essential for landing humor on screen. From Ben Stiller’s hilarious Zoolander nods to Steve Martin’s thoughtful gestures, every comedic moment was carefully mapped, planned, and refined before cameras rolled.

Working directly with the talent, especially getting notes from Stiller himself, was an unforgettable part of the process. It reinforced how storyboards are not just technical tools; they are a medium for collaboration, communication, and perfecting the performance before production begins.

For creative directors and filmmakers, this campaign demonstrates the value of detailed storyboards. They save time, prevent headaches, and most importantly, ensure the jokes land. When humor is the heart of your story, nothing should be left to chance, and that’s exactly where storyboards come in.

Whether you’re planning a Super Bowl spot or a smaller branded content piece, investing in high-quality storyboards gives you a blueprint for timing, gestures, and expressions that keeps your audience laughing and engaged.

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